Interesting. But I think you should point speech bubbles to their respective owner. I think you also should "justify" (is that a proper word?) the text and center it in the speech bubble. Also a little shading under Scootaloo and Applebloom will give a scenery better view and unflat it a bit I'm also not sure about font. I think more comic one will look better. I also can see some leftovers form backgrounds sticking out from frames between panels. You should pay attention to that kind of thing.
Why thank you for your honestly I see now I am trying to get the backgrounds right not to good though, I miss that sticking out have seen it in some comics but I have fixed it several times but I dont know how to reupload the picture without deleting the actual file, I would justify the text but as I am using gimp it doesnt give an option of choosing how to centre anything, and pointing the bubbles would be a good idea due thanks for the extra assistance it is much appreciated
I agree fluttershy's kind heart would love to help scoots even know she scared of flying herself sometimes and rd is too full of herself most of the times to see that scootaloo needs some help from her